Hard day- problems with the drawing of the brown figure and its weight. The centre line caused complications. The breakthrough came when I switched the canvases- the figures now follow each other (and the viewer follows) into an enigmatic space. Is it enough?- to test the painting I'll introduce a subtle grid tomorrow to identify location. Love,love,love the horizontal, the attention drawn to the dividing line by the white canvas, and the curiosity of the repeated pose. Strange piece.